tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post1588103558531271377..comments2024-02-14T13:04:30.499-05:00Comments on Good To Begin Well, Better To End Well: No Kiss Blogfest, Year ThreeAmalia Dillinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-48244460948976226692012-01-04T23:49:41.411-05:002012-01-04T23:49:41.411-05:00Ooh.. great job with this!Ooh.. great job with this!WritingNuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16326756274887055685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-44900159974126787212012-01-03T22:16:49.332-05:002012-01-03T22:16:49.332-05:00Love the last line! And I liked how you incorporat...Love the last line! And I liked how you incorporated wine into the scene...makes the whole thing somehow more intimate ;) Great blogfest entry!<br /><br />~TRA<br /><br /><a href="http://xtheredangelx.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">The Red Angel Blog</a>Wendy Luhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08048944852796207898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-29182349029673494752012-01-03T12:38:16.581-05:002012-01-03T12:38:16.581-05:00Yep, definitely an uncooperative fellow ;) Can'...Yep, definitely an uncooperative fellow ;) Can't fault his taste in beverages, though ;)1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-54661904604741041432012-01-02T23:32:40.671-05:002012-01-02T23:32:40.671-05:00Wish he would have gripped her instead of the coun...Wish he would have gripped her instead of the counter ;D Good job! Thanks for sharing!C.V. Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11882270682230422885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-53098708963742352902012-01-02T23:19:16.592-05:002012-01-02T23:19:16.592-05:00Amalia, this is crazy good! I agree, yes you DO kn...Amalia, this is crazy good! I agree, yes you DO know what you're doing. Love your characters and your writing is delicious.<br /><br />~ <a href="http://thatrebelwithablog.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">that rebel, Olivia</a>Olivia J. Herrell, writing as O.J. Barréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01107021392937169669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-26106849654684564992012-01-02T22:25:13.570-05:002012-01-02T22:25:13.570-05:00Now that's an enticing read! I'd be intere...Now that's an enticing read! I'd be interested in knowing what ends up happening with these two. Thanks for visiting me, today! : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00038885104845754639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-54064508387788014612012-01-02T20:48:38.035-05:002012-01-02T20:48:38.035-05:00*fans self* Oh my. That was awesome. And hot. And ...*fans self* Oh my. That was awesome. And hot. And awesome.KT Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08142350855635462698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-50230629172981369372012-01-02T18:47:31.684-05:002012-01-02T18:47:31.684-05:00Holy wow. This was awesome. Great descriptions. I&...Holy wow. This was awesome. Great descriptions. I'm hooked. Nice job!Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-38412013782287995602012-01-02T18:18:36.625-05:002012-01-02T18:18:36.625-05:00Oh my, that was one sexy excerpt. I love the wine ...Oh my, that was one sexy excerpt. I love the wine cellar setting. This line especially got me, "That time, the noise she made was closer to a moan. And it was formed around his name."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-49372706696886936662012-01-02T17:57:26.889-05:002012-01-02T17:57:26.889-05:00good job. i love the last line.good job. i love the last line.Michelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-29463187785426594492012-01-02T17:39:49.367-05:002012-01-02T17:39:49.367-05:00Oh my, he is an all-in guy. Poor girl. I loved the...Oh my, he is an all-in guy. Poor girl. I loved the way he just nuzzled her behind the ear so naturally. It clearly is what he does.<br />wonderful scene, Amalia.Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-48394748766623436732012-01-02T17:22:06.273-05:002012-01-02T17:22:06.273-05:00This was fun! I'm curious to hear their backs...This was fun! I'm curious to hear their backstory and see where this goes from here.Issyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04272961878872005524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-67827366187535398992012-01-02T16:20:33.677-05:002012-01-02T16:20:33.677-05:00ooh i really liked this. Especially the "made...ooh i really liked this. Especially the "made himself at home" comment.Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-73564926025028485232012-01-02T15:11:39.372-05:002012-01-02T15:11:39.372-05:00Pirithous is not subject to your rules, Amalia. So...Pirithous is not subject to your rules, Amalia. Sorry. #statingtheobviousTina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12482449594775810887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-86787808166941068192012-01-02T14:08:56.971-05:002012-01-02T14:08:56.971-05:00I love the mythogicalness with the modern day ness...I love the mythogicalness with the modern day ness.<br /><br />Heart.Maganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14045036129073244749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-91707336262929612492012-01-02T12:34:59.399-05:002012-01-02T12:34:59.399-05:00Well, whether or not you know what you're doin...Well, whether or not you know what you're doing, this is a romance I'd pick up and read, so well done!<br /><br />I loved it! :)Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-57958301117317284452012-01-02T12:21:39.159-05:002012-01-02T12:21:39.159-05:00I love the mythological spin. I think you did a fa...I love the mythological spin. I think you did a fantastic job. :)Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-79335958203622594042012-01-02T11:42:28.676-05:002012-01-02T11:42:28.676-05:00Very well done for someone who has no idea what th...Very well done for someone who has no idea what they are doing. I love mythology. I'll be back.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-83324455103777311402012-01-02T11:12:50.103-05:002012-01-02T11:12:50.103-05:00LOL, calling me Ms. Mallis makes me feel old. But ...LOL, calling me Ms. Mallis makes me feel old. But that was sexy! I was so waiting for him to make a joke about "filling" her. I always loved coming here for the mythological spins. Thanks so much for participating!Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-1517547508106258142012-01-02T11:05:42.607-05:002012-01-02T11:05:42.607-05:00I think her really wants to bring back the RA! in ...I think her really wants to bring back the RA! in ravished! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-78633912428145653112012-01-02T10:52:15.861-05:002012-01-02T10:52:15.861-05:00You totally know what you're doing. I LOVE thi...You totally know what you're doing. I LOVE this even if it was SUPER hard to get Pirithous to not jump in there.<br /><br />:)<br /><br /><3 <3 <3Mia Haysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01041441666482084762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-47331595779664869962012-01-02T10:13:53.813-05:002012-01-02T10:13:53.813-05:00Wow. and Wow! You've done a great job of captu...Wow. and Wow! You've done a great job of capturing the difference in cultures, and Pirithous' thoughts. Loved this ^_^Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.com