tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post2777239051195694263..comments2024-02-14T13:04:30.499-05:00Comments on Good To Begin Well, Better To End Well: No-Kiss Blogfest! Let the UST rule!Amalia Dillinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-90146218472499929132010-01-03T20:50:29.414-05:002010-01-03T20:50:29.414-05:00Loved this scene! Especially the line "The wa...Loved this scene! Especially the line "The way Thorin had looked at her. It was as though she was water and he had crossed a desert to find her." Just wow, it's one of those scenes you remember. Great Job!Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-26211869917872746242010-01-03T14:44:38.062-05:002010-01-03T14:44:38.062-05:00Great scene and great description!Great scene and great description!Alissa Grossohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16701189791875707920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-43538338415176419642010-01-03T13:27:01.395-05:002010-01-03T13:27:01.395-05:00Great scene, but that last part HOOKED me! I wish ...Great scene, but that last part HOOKED me! I wish there was more to read!!Sara {Rhapsody and Chaos}https://www.blogger.com/profile/09824996048264979275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-68934497935758743622010-01-03T13:26:45.192-05:002010-01-03T13:26:45.192-05:00I loved the "everything went dark" at th...I loved the "everything went dark" at the end...well done, and this isn't a genre I normally read!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18096173111325220168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-78558804212854151292010-01-03T02:10:27.716-05:002010-01-03T02:10:27.716-05:00Lots of good stuff there.
Confused about the endin...Lots of good stuff there.<br />Confused about the ending...makes me want to read more!<br />Good job!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-36105329919652588872010-01-03T00:39:44.556-05:002010-01-03T00:39:44.556-05:00I love the layers to this scene and these characte...I love the layers to this scene and these characters! This was every bit as enjoyable as your Kissing Blogfest scene was.C R Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-43264503736471960402010-01-03T00:23:47.345-05:002010-01-03T00:23:47.345-05:00Oh, that completely sucked me in. I'm not sure...Oh, that completely sucked me in. I'm not sure I understood everything--obviously there is some history behind much of it--but that was very satisfying.Sharon Gerlachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03794318894344310715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-5171057675340271642010-01-02T23:11:24.815-05:002010-01-02T23:11:24.815-05:00You have such a way of bringing the reader into yo...You have such a way of bringing the reader into your world. Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13380826220166366026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-33679064219650110312010-01-02T21:53:14.154-05:002010-01-02T21:53:14.154-05:00Thanks Everyone!Thanks Everyone!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-22241621211440884012010-01-02T21:41:55.712-05:002010-01-02T21:41:55.712-05:00Very, very well done. Nice scene. You have an unmi...Very, very well done. Nice scene. You have an unmistakable talent. Can't wait for you to be published!John Carosellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18093496153565390998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-16104443749963228682010-01-02T19:41:24.051-05:002010-01-02T19:41:24.051-05:00marvelous scene ! i love the tension (:marvelous scene ! i love the tension (:LittoMiss isuethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12732668024487371210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-59103754056375800922010-01-02T19:17:51.843-05:002010-01-02T19:17:51.843-05:00Wow! I really want to find out what happens next:...Wow! I really want to find out what happens next:)Melissa Hursthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15530652829980250261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-61592561822124780112010-01-02T19:01:43.768-05:002010-01-02T19:01:43.768-05:00"I'm yours." Talk about double mean..."I'm yours." Talk about double meaning!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing, that was great.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09687047513163296827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-19788580696921005672010-01-02T18:23:46.436-05:002010-01-02T18:23:46.436-05:00I'm yours says it all, and you totally grabbed...<i>I'm yours</i> says it all, and you totally grabbed me with the <i>everything went dark</i> at the end. More please!VR Barkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04927993233682731113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-63862820581064504462010-01-02T17:37:56.099-05:002010-01-02T17:37:56.099-05:00Oh yes this is too good to be cut! Love it, sigggh...Oh yes this is too good to be cut! Love it, sigggh!!Diana Pazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04368186068872293410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-89296053423682528872010-01-02T17:11:50.462-05:002010-01-02T17:11:50.462-05:00Ooooooooooooh soooo good! And the ending, wow!! Lo...Ooooooooooooh soooo good! And the ending, wow!! Loved it!<br /><br />Thank you so much for participating and helping to make this day special!Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-14551324217794117732010-01-02T16:26:52.001-05:002010-01-02T16:26:52.001-05:00Sarah: I just died laughing. I'll let him know...Sarah: I just died laughing. I'll let him know there's an open invitation for him elsewhere. :P<br /><br />Karen: Which ones?<br /><br />Bethany and V.S.: Thanks!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-61922461472842048752010-01-02T15:58:40.150-05:002010-01-02T15:58:40.150-05:00Lovely scene. The last part was the best!Lovely scene. The last part was the best!V. Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00406440235719919992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-71493120989551524342010-01-02T15:29:16.498-05:002010-01-02T15:29:16.498-05:00There is plenty of room for Lars to come and live ...There is plenty of room for Lars to come and live with me. You can help him pack up his bags, so he comes faster.Just Another Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-52872729809442568862010-01-02T14:57:15.317-05:002010-01-02T14:57:15.317-05:00I love the tension in this scene :) I definitely w...I love the tension in this scene :) I definitely want to know more about the characters.The last bit is very intriguing. Love it!BK Mattinglyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13758638245846622284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-19199676748894413722010-01-02T14:43:20.602-05:002010-01-02T14:43:20.602-05:00Great writing and very intriguing scene. And love ...Great writing and very intriguing scene. And love some of the names of your characters. :)<br /><a href="http://karenamandahooper.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">My Blog</a>kahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-91634005041528065762010-01-02T13:59:33.800-05:002010-01-02T13:59:33.800-05:00Sherrinda: that's one of my favorite lines, to...Sherrinda: that's one of my favorite lines, too.<br /><br />Ash: thanks!<br /><br />Shannon: I don't mind at all! I'm thrilled! Thanks for reading!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-19597342935128230142010-01-02T13:53:24.123-05:002010-01-02T13:53:24.123-05:00That was excellent. My head is spinning with quest...That was excellent. My head is spinning with questions now and I want more! Well done you! <br /><br />Thank you for sharing and I hope you don't mind that I'm following your blog now. I love connecting with other writers.Shannon Messengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08003607156860716462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-11071959032357783892010-01-02T13:38:02.862-05:002010-01-02T13:38:02.862-05:00your writing is beautiful!your writing is beautiful!Ash. Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03796125310595262268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-34159715609199785532010-01-02T12:54:44.660-05:002010-01-02T12:54:44.660-05:00Oooo, very sigh-worthy! "I'm yours...&quo...Oooo, very sigh-worthy! "I'm yours..." *heaving big sigh* Great job!!! This sounds like such an interesting story!Sherrinda Ketchersidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07581676437345249386noreply@blogger.com