tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post328651764750348091..comments2024-02-14T13:04:30.499-05:00Comments on Good To Begin Well, Better To End Well: #FridayFlash: I am EuropaAmalia Dillinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-6783568801811443442011-05-22T13:01:32.975-04:002011-05-22T13:01:32.975-04:00I love the strength of the narrator's voice Am...I love the strength of the narrator's voice Amalia! Also I FEEL SO BAD THAT I AM MONTHS LATE with this praise because it is awesome!Mia Haysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01041441666482084762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-51129193288171185432011-03-28T13:04:43.419-04:002011-03-28T13:04:43.419-04:00That is one clever young person. These days it'...That is one clever young person. These days it's a miracle that kids know what europe is (and i'm talking about the ones who live in europe) let alone Europa.<br />I loved this story, and the rapid change from dream to reality worked well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-61132756373607426682011-03-25T20:20:22.235-04:002011-03-25T20:20:22.235-04:00Thanks Khakjaan! at first I was like "What? O...Thanks Khakjaan! at first I was like "What? OVERwritten? it is so short!" but you were totally right, and I'm glad that you pointed to it.<br /><br />I can't make any promises on the Combatwords front but don't worry, I have been checking back and I will definitely play again in the future, if not this weekend, then another!<br /><br />Thanks Keriann! I'm glad you Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-27154945675791192812011-03-25T19:31:58.552-04:002011-03-25T19:31:58.552-04:00That was awesome!! :DThat was awesome!! :DKeriann Greaney Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00584000678535698327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-56275297180385182362011-03-25T18:47:16.320-04:002011-03-25T18:47:16.320-04:00Ok, that's what I thought--a revision. I thoug...Ok, that's what I thought--a revision. I thought, 'hmm, maybe I was just being a jerk and didn't read the piece fairly the 1st time.' Then I realized, no, this is a revision. You did such a great job with it--you kept the soul of the 1st draft, but smoothed the edges. Good choice on increasing psychic distance; less rhapsodic, but dry wit suits this comp really well imo. <br /><brKhakjaan Wessingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05501187261486087495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-17341325239696715492011-03-25T11:57:28.776-04:002011-03-25T11:57:28.776-04:00Thanks, Tom!Thanks, Tom!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-39551158352513658832011-03-25T11:45:04.024-04:002011-03-25T11:45:04.024-04:00That was fantastic!That was fantastic!Thomas G. Hale Sr.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03060113712489751910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-5873116967385961762011-03-25T10:21:04.955-04:002011-03-25T10:21:04.955-04:00Haha. Thanks both of you! I'm glad you enjoyed...Haha. Thanks both of you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-84412154686484166952011-03-25T09:57:39.486-04:002011-03-25T09:57:39.486-04:00Now THAT was awesome!Now THAT was awesome!Vicky Alvear Shecterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17570828339389206203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5458380.post-38792762902519124322011-03-25T01:54:58.313-04:002011-03-25T01:54:58.313-04:00Haha! That ending definitely caught me off guard,...Haha! That ending definitely caught me off guard, but in a good way.Stephanie Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17437077559099315853noreply@blogger.com